where there's a creation, there's a muse.
well , its not god .. u were introspecting i suppose ..
well i donno what made you write this, but if its current... i hope you feel better.....take care and keep writing..........
Doing nothing is the greatest sin... :)
Painful. Liked the undercurrent of innocence.
was like something unexpected hitting me square on face.not sure if it was intended or coincidence, but thank you.
Hmm.. thats the story with majority of us mortal beings.. You will find millions sitting and answering the same NOTHING.. including me ..
@ Bibhash:Hmm.. But I did go by my faith.Well, Welcome to Muse Memoir!@ Thousif:It comes from Teenage Diary. But it creeps in. And it's for the good.@Quest:True.@ Anwesa:Wow! WOW!How I wanted somebody to feel that innocence, I'm so thankful to you. You are a writer's delight. :)@ Abhishek:Intended. No. Not at all. Well, I'll talk about this to you later.@ Bikram:Truly!Thanks for reading.
What a painful feeling...
u expressed void in an excellent way! i jus loved it!
Beautifully sad!Whatever it is, i am sure you would get over it!Take care
No wonder it comes as one nasty blow...usually i find your posts full of light and encouragement, introspection...This one was introspective too, and dark...with deeper meanings. For me it not only is about innocence...but also a impulse to justify and take a stand. We do that with God... justification... though we put it in a more humble form - 'prayer' that is.
Hmmm, depressing - did you really do nothing? A smile, a bit of support, a bit of help, an offhand bit of good advice - the sum of these and other tiny droplets - I would like to believe they add up to something...Doing nothing when something needs to be done is sinful, but in this case the judgment passed seems a bit too harsh... :)Perhaps I'm interpreting the lines out of context...
I liked the whole conversation with God thing.Poignant write.
Hmm... well I thought U had exams... U shud have said revising :)Jokes apart, sumtimes mind does go blank....
Deep emotions are expressed very well.
@ Prajyot:Yeah, true. @ Divya:Thanks. @ Akansha:Thanks for the concern. But I'm perfectly fine. :)
@ Priyala:Introspection: YesDark : NoPrayer: YesJustification: No@ Anubhav & Priyala:Its just a word with God. And you would know how if you read the line What did you do? as a friend's concern for another and not a judgemental statement. You would see darkness disintegrating with something powerful. And Priyala,I liked the word prayer. It lit me up. Great! Thanks.Yes Anubhav, I did nothing. But this is not the end. Doing nothing is mere process.
@ Aayushi:Thank you so much.@ Suresh:Oh I guess you missed a comment somewhere. My exams got over. :)@ Chandrika:Thanks :)@ All:Pleasure to be read by you all and got some real enlightening feedback! Thanks. :)
I liked that...small yet conveys a lot. Nothing....root cause of many thing, right?
@ Destiny's child:Well dunno. Nothing can be everything too I believe.
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