I won’t write me anymore
It’s as if I pretend
Scribbling unnecessary mirth
Or pouring down exaggerated woes.
Such a show-off
Drawing attention
I make you laugh
When I’m overjoyed
Agonized
I inflict you with same.
I describe things
Metaphorically
That leaves you stuck
Pondering…
I complicate things
Leaving it worded
Entangled in close knit of ideas
I put forward a brief state
And that is;
Never to be visited again…
ps: This blog isn't shutting down ! Paradoxical you may say.
5 comments:
I can definitely associate with the poem... This might sound hypocritical, but don't stop writing!
I guess all your readers would agree that you're an amazing and gifted wordsmith - so I do hope the doubts and emotions in the poem are a result of you pretending to harbor the same.
p.s. - and yeah it's amazing how a poem about a reluctance to write can be so well written...
:) Reminds me of a song which says "Gaana mere bas ki baat nahin, sur aur taal ka saath nahin.....".
First thing first: thanks for the ps
Not many of us have what it takes to be able to self-criticize... Lovely work
Not related but I was somehow reminded of the frantic mugging the night before the exams and never visiting those ideas ever again in life...
hmm, well you tried to say something and i guess u have succeeded in saying so, says abt many emotions this one... i liked it :)
take care and keep writing.........
@ Anubhav:
I blinked several times after reading this comment of yours. I was too stunned to respond to anyone at that time, after writing this post and reading the comments. Now that I am out of that disorientation though still in one of a different kind I can manage to bring out sth.
I hope I make some sense.
@ Anwesa di:
Yeah, LOL. I get it.
@ Nomad:
Not related;
He was looking as if hum uski hawa breathe kar ke jaa rahe hain.
FUNNY !!!
@ Thousif:
Thanks a lot ! Keep reading :)
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