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I feel the Same.. When I am there I am ignored.. but in my case its not the enemy its someone else... Its weird when you see something written, I am sure you had completely different view writing it and i read it different .. someone else will read it different .. Same word but all mean different .. Beautiful
Deep,man!!Enemies have control on you. So better don't react to them.
Oh my.Complelling ,Mysterious , andoutstanding. I loved this. Great title andfantastic style.
Enemies these days have started growing up in people's life..wat say?LOVE , TRUST have no value
Such complex feelings in such few lines :)
deeply confused. and frankly. :)i can't see any way to measure these lines... :(i can't even imagine such a benign enemy who would do nothing but ignore. and wait. this intrigues me - especially when this is from uncle's trove.and is the picture of the shadow supposed to hint something?
@ All:Interesting knowing your perspectives.@ Bikram:Open interpretation amuses the creator as well.@ Anwesa di:I'm glad u liked it.:)@ RRN:All praise.I'm happiee.:)@ Prajyot:true.@ Adisha:Thanks.Welcome to Muse Memoir.I'm glad to have you here.@ Sim:Frankly speaking, the essence of this poem is in the last line;Hence, he still standsHere, it talk about invincibility. supremacy.My Enemy exists, survives and has a name because he is MY enemy.Each word in the verse adds much more to it than what it literally means.He awaits me.But then he disregards me. overlooks. eludes...Being my enemy makes him blessed to still be here.survive here.This is a poem of ultimate supremacy.* I enjoyed translating this one. :)
deep lines. i re-read the poem. i m loving it.. :)
wonderful! simply put...short and sweet
@ Sim:thanks :)@ Nalini Hebbar:Thanks ma'm.I'm glad to have you here.Welcome to Muse Memoir.
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