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February 18, 2010

Take Care!

Walking through those streets
Endless footmarks
Of my own treads
I get.

Acquainted alone…

Every night I search for it
A smile distanced
Where a tear was scraped out
Alas!  Some forgotten road…

Take me there
Where I can catch one glimpse
Of your silly scorn
And laugh unrestrained.

15 comments:

akanksha said...

Beautiful! :)
A journey called life!

prajyot said...

As usual...best written poem...

The Holy Lama said...

Hurt? Time is the best balm. The feeling will pass and you will feel reborn anew.

Thousif Raza said...

oh i had those emotions once.... and i can feel what you have written... nice words :)



take care and keep writing.........

Priya Joyce said...

missing ur college?

ANWESA said...

Yearning for love,life and joy...

That's what I gather from this post...

Its the sweet pain of life.

manjiT said...

tuika are you in love or something. i mean none of my bussiness but jes was wondering. u need not answer... but i keep wondering reading ur stuff so thought woth an ask.

Anirban Chakraborty said...

@ Manjit : Yeah, she is in love.

With the artist.

TULSYAN said...

tuku, u r simply awesome!!!!!!!!......

s.H.a.S.h.I said...

hey tulika,.. tht was beautiful.. ure poems just keep gettin better. love works wonders in us :)

anubhavb said...

To quote Sim's latest "Guruji" post -

(1) Committed but separated by distance:

lambi dastaan pyar ki barkarar:
1 paisa per second.

kar lo baat yaar.


That's the first thing that came to my mind on reading the poem. :P

Beautiful poetry as always.

ABHISHEK SiM said...

:)

beautiful

p.s.: @ VC: lol! too good! sahi! now thats called making boundaries clear :)

Suresh Kumar said...

Hmm... Missing somebody?

Tulika said...

@ Akansha:
Thanks :)

@ Prajyot:
As usual.. Thanks :)

@ Holy Lama:
Hurt.. umm..no. pining is the word I guess.

Thanks. :)

@ Thousif:
ohh.. really..??!!

@Priya:

No. I'm fed up. May be I ll miss it later. But happy to be free now.

@ Anwesa di:
absolutely!

@Manjit:
Yes. :)

@ Lattu:
Thanks for the testimonial :P

@ Anchit (I'm still not sure):
Thanks. Simply Million Thanks. :)

@ Shashi:
Yeah true,
Thanks a lot.

@ Anubhav:
LOL.
But even more economical options are available u kno?! :D

@ Sim:
Thanks :D

@Suresh Kumar:
Yeah :(

TULSYAN said...

really wanna get back there....

tuku, keep guessing....lol...aree i said, u r right...