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May 4, 2010

Dusk

Blades golden brown
crisply stretched around
popped up goats out of nowhere.


Faraway a vast velvet green
lay over a giant
into one deep sleep
enticing dense fog and
a crescent.


Pellucid waters
volatile of vision
changed a course there
and made it  here
gushes in 
exploring calm...


Disappearing into night 
trees grow dark and
there's a spirit
light.

ps: Thanks for telling me to look out of the window.

9 comments:

Thousif Raza said...

as always its beautiful :)



take care and keep writing....:)

RRN said...

wow.


after I read this I had to step away for a moment and stroll around my house.
i came back and read it again and it hit with even more power the second time.

it will be enjoyable to think more of this written here.

thanks for writing it.

pure greatness !

Priya Joyce said...

girl u write beautifully...

ANWESA said...

I loved the imagery,vivid and beautiful.

Divya said...

i really loved reading this... poetry isnt easy at all... u write so beautifully :)

Usha Pisharody said...

Lovely, the beauty is tangible!

Tulika said...

@ Thousif:
Thanks a lot. :)

@ RRN:
Great to hear that. It's such a delight to hear something like that about your writing.

million thanks. :)

@ Priya:
Thanks Priya. So sweet of you.:)

@ Anwesa di:
Thank a lot.

@ Divya:
I'm overjoyed.
Yeyy..!! Thanks :)

@ Usha Ma'm:
Thank you.

Anirban Chakraborty said...

Time for your next post.

Tulika said...

@ Lattu:

Yeah sweets, sure.