Blades golden brown
crisply stretched around
popped up goats out of nowhere.
Faraway a vast velvet green
lay over a giant
into one deep sleep
enticing dense fog and
a crescent.
Pellucid waters
volatile of vision
changed a course there
and made it here
gushes in
exploring calm...
Disappearing into night
trees grow dark and
there's a spirit
light.
ps: Thanks for telling me to look out of the window.
9 comments:
as always its beautiful :)
take care and keep writing....:)
wow.
after I read this I had to step away for a moment and stroll around my house.
i came back and read it again and it hit with even more power the second time.
it will be enjoyable to think more of this written here.
thanks for writing it.
pure greatness !
girl u write beautifully...
I loved the imagery,vivid and beautiful.
i really loved reading this... poetry isnt easy at all... u write so beautifully :)
Lovely, the beauty is tangible!
@ Thousif:
Thanks a lot. :)
@ RRN:
Great to hear that. It's such a delight to hear something like that about your writing.
million thanks. :)
@ Priya:
Thanks Priya. So sweet of you.:)
@ Anwesa di:
Thank a lot.
@ Divya:
I'm overjoyed.
Yeyy..!! Thanks :)
@ Usha Ma'm:
Thank you.
Time for your next post.
@ Lattu:
Yeah sweets, sure.
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