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June 28, 2010

Someday...

My contours ripple
neatly combed by waters
gushes smooth
will soon be carried by the billows
miles away...

You sit there
gazing strongly
where in depths
I lie...

And again
you smile today.

I meet you here everyday
hoping that the stream
would flow back
someday...

14 comments:

Anirban Chakraborty said...

:O

Beauty.

I have never been good at comprehending or appreciating poetry, but this one.....simply GRIPPED me.

Aayushi Mehta said...

Loved this, especially the last line. Was beautiful.

Avi said...

Nice !
Reminded me of some of the lines in the song 'panchhi nadia pawan ke jhoke...'
It'll strike me the next time I goto Marina.

ANWESA said...

Loved this. Read it over and over again.

Bikramjit said...

wowo Tulika very well written.. its indeed very beautifull..

anubhavb said...

Reminded me of that Narcissus myth from the alchemist (guess you'd posted that as well earlier)...

Heraclitus's "You cannot step twice into the same river." also came to mind :)

An interesting story/scenario conveyed via beautiful verse as always - great work !! :)

Pooja said...

Brilliant!

Nice blog!

ABHISHEK SiM said...

It took me a while see the Beautiful... truly.

@ anubhav: me likes your comment ("Heraclitus...").

Tulika said...

@ Lattu:
:)
You say that everytime.

@ Aayushi:
Thanks.
Yes, the last line brings forth numerous emotions to me. :)

@ Avi:
Thanks..
And yes, one nice song.

@ Anwesa di:
Yeyyy !! Thanks a lot.
:)

@ Mann:
Thanks a lottt !!!

@ Anubhav:
:O
Heraclitus ! BRILLIANT !

Now that is deconstruction precisely.
Loved the poem even more after you fabulous interpretation of it . Thanks you so much !!!

Tulika said...

@ Pooja:
Thanks a lot.
Welcome to Muse Memoir :)

@ Sim:

Thank you :)

It took you a while..? Were you thinking beyond Heraclitus and Narcissus kya..? :D

Saras said...

Exquisite poem, beautifully written. Good job Tulika.

Tulika said...

@ Saras Sir:
Thank you so muchhh !

Thousif Raza said...

:) :) :)

take care and keep writing.....

anwer zahidi said...

A beutiful rendering of poetical thought---Its a very good poem

anwer zahidi