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February 5, 2010

Angel


Doe eyed, fair skinned
Delicate and so mine
That touch still lingers…

Finally I had you
After months of enquiry.

As I try embracing you
They prompt:
Careful.”

Those shiny crystals
Examining me
I wait …

Some familiar smell
Aah! You smile
And I love you back.

My tiny hands
Insufficient
Your intrinsic trust
Powerful.

Hence,
Birth of my angel.

-----x-x-x------

Year after year
Perfect mates
Partners in crime.
Maa screams there:
Lo… the devils united.”

--x-x--

PS: Rightly said, there's no other love like the love for a brother. There's no other love like the love from a brother.

20 comments:

anubhavb said...

Poetry which can be comprehended and appreciated by masters and philistines (such as myself :P)

Well written as always...

Thousif Raza said...

i mean beautiful doesnt even define it.... it is so very very very good.. those were some lines.. i am touched... its been just a week but its great to see you back...:)


take care and keep writing...........

Divya said...

thts so sweet :)

who is ur angel?

The West Wind said...

So sweet.. I can so understand what you feel.. the bitter-sweet love that siblings share cant be expressed in words.

akanksha said...

Loved it! U r just too good!
And I agree, There's no other love like the love for a brother. There's no other love like the love from a brother.

Keep writing :)

Suresh Kumar said...

Ha... such a lovely poem... Kash! I had a younger sister. :)

Priya Joyce said...

gal I love the way u write...u actually got me interested..in Tulika's style...

prajyot said...

hey hi...sorry for late comments...i was off desk these days..but now i am back...

so wass up?

manjiT said...

i crave for sibblings. i wish i had one.

TULSYAN said...

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ABHISHEK SiM said...

HAHAHA... the last line is sooo typical of an Indian mother! perfectly portrayed!

And amazing details. I went all nervous and excited trying to imagine what would it feel to hold a newborn for the very first time! *wow*. Never had a sibling - can only imagine. Manjit actually said what I wanted to say.

Bikram said...

Oh yes.. Sibblings are a must. I am lucky to have and loads of cousins. I guess my mum was the luckiest to have 7 siblings :O ..and hence a buket full of cousins :)

WE fight , we care, we hate , we love So much But we all know that We are ONE no matter what.. right or wrong..

Excellent POEM :)

Tyro said...

Beautifully described. :)
Cheers. :)

~TyRo~

Chandrika Shubham said...

The poem was cute as a new born baby. :)

ANWESA said...

how sweet !

You reminded me of my angel now..

Tulika said...

@ All:

Thank you so much.

I'm glad that it brought back fond memories to some, while the craving to others...

:)

Anirban Chakraborty said...

I am glad I don't have a brother...or a sister....
I want to love you, and only you ..with all my heart, soul and body.

Love is YOU, you are LOVE.

Tulika said...

:)

Destiny's child... said...

That was super sweet and cute :)

Ritvik said...

"Doe eyed, fair skinned
Delicate and so mine"
:D
ohh...meri itni tareef....

i just cried....

hehe....

nice work sister blister....