Doe eyed, fair skinned
Delicate and so mine
That touch still lingers…
Finally I had you
After months of enquiry.
As I try embracing you
They prompt:
“Careful.”
Those shiny crystals
Examining me
I wait …
Some familiar smell
Aah! You smile
And I love you back.
My tiny hands
Insufficient
Your intrinsic trust
Powerful.
Hence,
Birth of my angel.
-----x-x-x------
Year after year
Perfect mates
Partners in crime.
Maa screams there:
“Lo… the devils united.”
--x-x--
PS: Rightly said, there's no other love like the love for a brother. There's no other love like the love from a brother.
19 comments:
Poetry which can be comprehended and appreciated by masters and philistines (such as myself :P)
Well written as always...
i mean beautiful doesnt even define it.... it is so very very very good.. those were some lines.. i am touched... its been just a week but its great to see you back...:)
take care and keep writing...........
thts so sweet :)
who is ur angel?
So sweet.. I can so understand what you feel.. the bitter-sweet love that siblings share cant be expressed in words.
Loved it! U r just too good!
And I agree, There's no other love like the love for a brother. There's no other love like the love from a brother.
Keep writing :)
Ha... such a lovely poem... Kash! I had a younger sister. :)
gal I love the way u write...u actually got me interested..in Tulika's style...
hey hi...sorry for late comments...i was off desk these days..but now i am back...
so wass up?
i crave for sibblings. i wish i had one.
HAHAHA... the last line is sooo typical of an Indian mother! perfectly portrayed!
And amazing details. I went all nervous and excited trying to imagine what would it feel to hold a newborn for the very first time! *wow*. Never had a sibling - can only imagine. Manjit actually said what I wanted to say.
Oh yes.. Sibblings are a must. I am lucky to have and loads of cousins. I guess my mum was the luckiest to have 7 siblings :O ..and hence a buket full of cousins :)
WE fight , we care, we hate , we love So much But we all know that We are ONE no matter what.. right or wrong..
Excellent POEM :)
Beautifully described. :)
Cheers. :)
~TyRo~
The poem was cute as a new born baby. :)
how sweet !
You reminded me of my angel now..
@ All:
Thank you so much.
I'm glad that it brought back fond memories to some, while the craving to others...
:)
I am glad I don't have a brother...or a sister....
I want to love you, and only you ..with all my heart, soul and body.
Love is YOU, you are LOVE.
:)
That was super sweet and cute :)
"Doe eyed, fair skinned
Delicate and so mine"
:D
ohh...meri itni tareef....
i just cried....
hehe....
nice work sister blister....
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