Walking through those streets
Endless footmarks
Of my own treads
I get.
Acquainted alone…
Every night I search for it
A smile distanced
Where a tear was scraped out
Alas! Some forgotten road…
Take me there
Where I can catch one glimpse
Of your silly scorn
And laugh unrestrained.
15 comments:
Beautiful! :)
A journey called life!
As usual...best written poem...
Hurt? Time is the best balm. The feeling will pass and you will feel reborn anew.
oh i had those emotions once.... and i can feel what you have written... nice words :)
take care and keep writing.........
missing ur college?
Yearning for love,life and joy...
That's what I gather from this post...
Its the sweet pain of life.
tuika are you in love or something. i mean none of my bussiness but jes was wondering. u need not answer... but i keep wondering reading ur stuff so thought woth an ask.
@ Manjit : Yeah, she is in love.
With the artist.
tuku, u r simply awesome!!!!!!!!......
hey tulika,.. tht was beautiful.. ure poems just keep gettin better. love works wonders in us :)
To quote Sim's latest "Guruji" post -
(1) Committed but separated by distance:
lambi dastaan pyar ki barkarar:
1 paisa per second.
kar lo baat yaar.
That's the first thing that came to my mind on reading the poem. :P
Beautiful poetry as always.
:)
beautiful
p.s.: @ VC: lol! too good! sahi! now thats called making boundaries clear :)
Hmm... Missing somebody?
@ Akansha:
Thanks :)
@ Prajyot:
As usual.. Thanks :)
@ Holy Lama:
Hurt.. umm..no. pining is the word I guess.
Thanks. :)
@ Thousif:
ohh.. really..??!!
@Priya:
No. I'm fed up. May be I ll miss it later. But happy to be free now.
@ Anwesa di:
absolutely!
@Manjit:
Yes. :)
@ Lattu:
Thanks for the testimonial :P
@ Anchit (I'm still not sure):
Thanks. Simply Million Thanks. :)
@ Shashi:
Yeah true,
Thanks a lot.
@ Anubhav:
LOL.
But even more economical options are available u kno?! :D
@ Sim:
Thanks :D
@Suresh Kumar:
Yeah :(
really wanna get back there....
tuku, keep guessing....lol...aree i said, u r right...
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