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July 27, 2010

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Cupped your hands
plunging it deep down
you bring me up
to drink it
to your soul.

But
you stopped and pondered.

What happened then?

I fell from the spaces
Trickled down
where I came from;

Not to be the same forever.

14 comments:

Naina said...

hmm.. nice!

Aayushi Mehta said...

Aww I don't know how you imagine such things, but definitely makes for great reading!

ABHISHEK SiM said...

beautiful would be an understatement! And I still don't know how to best interpret it, for I can relate to this in so many ways...

ANWESA said...

Poignant !!! Yet true.

Avi said...

Terrific !

Tulika said...

@ Naina:

I'm so glad to have you yaar. :)

@ Aayushi:
Even I dunno hw I imagine such things. But once you are with yourself and sth really intense happening inside you then definitely there's a flux.

Who else can know that better..? I wonder the same about you. Ochre, I still remember.


@ SiM:

I still dont know what I wanted to breathe out. I was also figuring myself out in some tumult.

@ Anwesa di:
Hmm. Yes. The sad part is that it's true.

@ Avi:
Thanks :)

Pooja said...

wow!

BRILLIANT!!

Suresh Kumar said...

How do u come up with such small, simple but very meaninful poems?
Nice one...

anubhavb said...

"Not to be the same forever"
Beautiful verse as always, but sorrowful...

Bikramjit said...

beautiful poem..

but then dont they say you shud stick to the roots so if you have trickled down to where you came from then basically you are HOME.. :)

dont know why they stopped i guess there BAD LUCK...

Thousif Raza said...

really good :)

take care and keep writing..........

Bubbly said...

i m jealous...how come u pen down such beautiful thoughts...he he...kiddng....very beautiful....

Ritvik said...

huh....din't get it...'again' :/....nyway...keep writing...
:)
:D

दीपशिखा वर्मा / DEEPSHIKHA VERMA said...

SO NICE :)