@ Aayushi: Even I dunno hw I imagine such things. But once you are with yourself and sth really intense happening inside you then definitely there's a flux.
Who else can know that better..? I wonder the same about you. Ochre, I still remember.
@ SiM:
I still dont know what I wanted to breathe out. I was also figuring myself out in some tumult.
@ Anwesa di: Hmm. Yes. The sad part is that it's true.
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hmm.. nice!
Aww I don't know how you imagine such things, but definitely makes for great reading!
beautiful would be an understatement! And I still don't know how to best interpret it, for I can relate to this in so many ways...
Poignant !!! Yet true.
Terrific !
@ Naina:
I'm so glad to have you yaar. :)
@ Aayushi:
Even I dunno hw I imagine such things. But once you are with yourself and sth really intense happening inside you then definitely there's a flux.
Who else can know that better..? I wonder the same about you. Ochre, I still remember.
@ SiM:
I still dont know what I wanted to breathe out. I was also figuring myself out in some tumult.
@ Anwesa di:
Hmm. Yes. The sad part is that it's true.
@ Avi:
Thanks :)
wow!
BRILLIANT!!
How do u come up with such small, simple but very meaninful poems?
Nice one...
"Not to be the same forever"
Beautiful verse as always, but sorrowful...
beautiful poem..
but then dont they say you shud stick to the roots so if you have trickled down to where you came from then basically you are HOME.. :)
dont know why they stopped i guess there BAD LUCK...
really good :)
take care and keep writing..........
i m jealous...how come u pen down such beautiful thoughts...he he...kiddng....very beautiful....
huh....din't get it...'again' :/....nyway...keep writing...
:)
:D
SO NICE :)
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